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I spent a lot of time writing my first draft of argumentative essay. But it was really interesting! I knew a lot of new things about a topic which I chose, about the Large Hadron Collider and read a lot of interesting articles connected with black holes and strangelets, which are little fragments of the strange matter. So, the best thing in writing this essay is that I learnt a lot of new things, and, of course, improved my skills of searching necessary information. My largest weakness in the first draft was badly developed citations. In the second draft I changed my citations to format, which, I wish, is right. Another weakness in my first draft was bad thesis statement. I hope I improved it. Also I read my essay several times and tried to correct mistakes. Also I used advises from peer review to improve my work. This essay is very different from previous ones. At first, this essay was based on arguments. It was too hard to find enough info to write it. At second, it was hard to choose interesting topic because the choice was too big and to choose from a big variety of opportunities sometimes is more difficult then to choose from several ones. At third, this essay was based on serious sources, while previous ones were based mostly on personal experience.